Cleaning the cupboard
last sunday morning,
found a book
soiled by a layer.
last sunday morning,
found a book
soiled by a layer.
of dust and indifference.
This work of emotion (read 'fiction')
which got to live
a reality of its own.
which got to live
a reality of its own.
I meet one.
Yet unfinished,
with a railway ticket,
used as a bookmark
still @ page no. 169.
Yet unfinished,
with a railway ticket,
used as a bookmark
still @ page no. 169.
This one has tarnished
a little more.
Weathered by a baggage
of expectations
a little more.
Weathered by a baggage
of expectations
or an everlasting wait??
Then realized,
Some stories are better unfinished..
Railway ticket used as a bookmark...*sigh* we all do that don't we?
ReplyDeleteI loved this post a lot. a Lot.
@Rohit: & the reply encouraged a lot Sir : ) thanku. very. many..
ReplyDeleteawsomeeeee......its just touchy
ReplyDeleteLovely post :) :)..Got me really wondering whether some stories are really better if unfinished..Cuz I always have this habit of having or seeking an ending to everything in life..
ReplyDeletethis feels unfinished... jitna tha achcha tha :)
ReplyDeletethought provoking!!
ReplyDeleteawesome work
@Aseem: thought sounds cruel but true. :)
ReplyDelete@Magik: unfinished? yeah chief, that's where the soul of this post resides. :)
@Rajeev: thankiee :)
@Mohini: :) thankiee kid.
ReplyDeleteDi, some stories are better left unfinished and some stories are better left to reach their finish on their own......Leave the bookmark at the same page......
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
@Sampanna: Waah, aap toh philosopher hai. :P And your comment completed the post, i guess!!
ReplyDeleteAnd the only way to know, if a story is better unfinished...is to finish it :-)
ReplyDelete@Impulsivator: If it's finished. It's 'finished'. So the reason, I left it unfinished. :)
ReplyDeletebut we sometime rue on why some stories didnt get deir [erfect ending. nice post.
ReplyDelete@Farooq: :) thanks bro. But only if, crib does help..
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